And a sneak peak at chapter 1.
I like this. But I think I might be more engaged in a dialog, Socratic, so to speak, where the father asks the son to be still and then what he hears, what he smells, what he sees, etc. The father helps him go deeper through encouraging him to listen again, what else he may see, etc.
Goosebumps. Great flow and topic, Glenn!
A book on the lines of the series of books by Richard Bach starting with Illusions, The Bridge Across Forever etc.